Friday, January 23, 2009

Response

A Different Side of the lake - Campbell Parsons
As the wind brushed my cold cheeks
And as the snow crunches by each step I take
I feel something different
The Canadian winter is incredible
I have walked there in the summer
But on these cold days the lake shore feels different
Although the winter looks calm the creatures of the forest are still near by
The rabbit’s foot steps are lying in the light powder on the beach.
I feel something different
The forest still feels warm to me
As I walk along the beach
I breathe in the fresh air
I feel the cold as the snowflakes fall upon my hair
I can only imagine the warmth of the hot chocolate
I will drink laterBut for now ill bask in natures great changes
I feel something differentI winter is such a different place
I could stay there forever

This poem was written by my friend Campbell,
I thought I was very insightfull and he used great use of words.
It flowed really well and was easy to follw. I felth like I was there and he really painted a picture for me to imagine. Campbell is very talented and I really enjoyed reading this poem.

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